Second Audience Feedback

A few weeks ago we showed our music videos to the rest of the class. We showed our first cut, and we gained some relevant feedback:

• The is part of the product which has no footage at the moment, which we intend to fill with a monster emerging from a cupboard symbolising the young girls fears. We were told that this would be hard to make without looking "cheesy" and therefore we should add an effect to it, like a blur effect to make it look more scary and not like just a person in a mask.
• We were also told that in the argument scene, the fact that the mother is lower down than the father suggests that we are attempting to have a power divide with the male being more dominant, however, we had no intention of making a power split. 
• We received the more criticism on the argument scene too, that the mother seems too happy.

We're going to discuss the feedback we received as a group and see if we're going to make changes based on the feedback we've been given.